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midnightdiddle) wrote2005-05-11 08:41 pm
midnightdiddle) wrote2005-05-11 08:41 pm
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The drabbly-thingy-ma-jigger.
"You're late!"
The indignant cries were sharp and familiar. Kakashi breathed through his nose slowly, feeling almost sick. "Naruto, come here. You too, Sakura, Sasuke." Sasuke was watching him suspiciously and he slouched, shoving his hands in his pockets. "I have to tell you all something, especially you, Naruto."
Naruto was practically beaming, shooting unconfident looks of bravado at Sasuke. "What is it, Kakashi-lazy-bastard-sensei? Huh?"
Kakashi pulled his hands from out of his pockets then shoved them back in, unsure. "Naruto, Iruka-sensei's dead." Blunt, too blunt, and he waited for Naruto's outburst.
"You're lying."
He turned, surprised, to Sasuke, not expecting this. Sasuke looked how he felt, as though he were about to throw up, and his eyes looked almost scared. 'Yes,' Kakashi's mind whispered, 'you've just proven that his sensei aren't immortal.'
"Iruka-sensei's not dead, we just saw him yesterday. He took us all out to ramen, and he bought Naruto five bowls."
It was one of the longest sentences Kakashi had ever heard him utter, and he'd rather have Sasuke never speak. "Sasuke," he began, but he didn't know what to say. For once, there was nothing to say, no joke to offhandedly deliver, no excuse to sell. He looked for someone else, something else, and turned his attention to Naruto. Naruto was bawling, a mess of streaming eyes and nose, his face red and scrunched up like a child, and with a jolt Kakashi remembered that they were children, all three of them, Sasuke with his scared eyes, Naruto with his dripping nose, and Sakura... Sakura...
"Sakura?" he asked, turning to look for her. Her hands were clenched into fists and pressed against her cheeks that still hadn't lost the baby-fat, and her green eyes were staring at the ground near Kakashi's feet. "Sakura?" he asked again, and when she lunged for him, throwing her arms around his waist to cry into his vest, he didn't move away. He patted her head clumsily, unsure how to comfort any of them, and wanting to do so more than anything.
"I'm going home," Naruto forced out between the strangled sobs, his blue eyes clenched shut. Kakashi held out a hand as the boy stumbled by, stopping him, and when Naruto looked up, looking so very lost and very familiar, Kakashi dug into a vest pocket.
"Godaime wanted me to give you this." He held out a hand, a key and pair of dogtags dangling. "It's Iruka's," he explained needlessly. Naruto grabbed it, tearing it out of Kakashi's grip, and ran. Sasuke was running after Naruto seconds later and Sakura let go of Kakashi, slowly following the two into the town, still crying. Kakashi watched them leave, once again feeling completely useless.
And I never did get around to taking my nap. Oh well, guess I'll sleep tonight.
"You're late!"
The indignant cries were sharp and familiar. Kakashi breathed through his nose slowly, feeling almost sick. "Naruto, come here. You too, Sakura, Sasuke." Sasuke was watching him suspiciously and he slouched, shoving his hands in his pockets. "I have to tell you all something, especially you, Naruto."
Naruto was practically beaming, shooting unconfident looks of bravado at Sasuke. "What is it, Kakashi-lazy-bastard-sensei? Huh?"
Kakashi pulled his hands from out of his pockets then shoved them back in, unsure. "Naruto, Iruka-sensei's dead." Blunt, too blunt, and he waited for Naruto's outburst.
"You're lying."
He turned, surprised, to Sasuke, not expecting this. Sasuke looked how he felt, as though he were about to throw up, and his eyes looked almost scared. 'Yes,' Kakashi's mind whispered, 'you've just proven that his sensei aren't immortal.'
"Iruka-sensei's not dead, we just saw him yesterday. He took us all out to ramen, and he bought Naruto five bowls."
It was one of the longest sentences Kakashi had ever heard him utter, and he'd rather have Sasuke never speak. "Sasuke," he began, but he didn't know what to say. For once, there was nothing to say, no joke to offhandedly deliver, no excuse to sell. He looked for someone else, something else, and turned his attention to Naruto. Naruto was bawling, a mess of streaming eyes and nose, his face red and scrunched up like a child, and with a jolt Kakashi remembered that they were children, all three of them, Sasuke with his scared eyes, Naruto with his dripping nose, and Sakura... Sakura...
"Sakura?" he asked, turning to look for her. Her hands were clenched into fists and pressed against her cheeks that still hadn't lost the baby-fat, and her green eyes were staring at the ground near Kakashi's feet. "Sakura?" he asked again, and when she lunged for him, throwing her arms around his waist to cry into his vest, he didn't move away. He patted her head clumsily, unsure how to comfort any of them, and wanting to do so more than anything.
"I'm going home," Naruto forced out between the strangled sobs, his blue eyes clenched shut. Kakashi held out a hand as the boy stumbled by, stopping him, and when Naruto looked up, looking so very lost and very familiar, Kakashi dug into a vest pocket.
"Godaime wanted me to give you this." He held out a hand, a key and pair of dogtags dangling. "It's Iruka's," he explained needlessly. Naruto grabbed it, tearing it out of Kakashi's grip, and ran. Sasuke was running after Naruto seconds later and Sakura let go of Kakashi, slowly following the two into the town, still crying. Kakashi watched them leave, once again feeling completely useless.
And I never did get around to taking my nap. Oh well, guess I'll sleep tonight.
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What is it with you and making me have tears ! :[ bwaaaaaaaaaaaaa * sniffles *
So sad ! How could you kill Iruka ?!?!?1
* calms down * Phew ... it's okay , I still luff joo ! XD ( scary mood swings lol )
The only thing is ... you didn't really erm ... whatchama call it ... expand ( ? ) much on Kakashi's reactions do Iruka's death . In your other drabble ( the freaky one ^^;; ) , were Kakashi and Iruka lovers ?
If not , that would kind of explain why Kakashi isn't really reacting at all to Ruka's death . O___o;;
oh well , awesome fic ! :D
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And how could I kill Iruka? Well, technically, it's
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How do you do that? Less than three minutes after I press the 'update' button and you review. It's cool. O_O
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It's my mad skillz ! bwahahah 1 XDD
jk =P
Actually , you always happen to update when I'm checking who's updated and stuff . lol
No complaints here though ! :D
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Your writing is gorgeous and there's no way we're going to let you forget that! :)
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If you have some idea of who he graduated with you could even include some inappropriate humor from someone thinking it was another of Iruka's bad jokes.
;)
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Love how Sasuke break first, and the others are unable to talk
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I adore Iruka, its a shame to kill him. What would happen if he was tortured for information and left for dead, but survived instead? Would anyone believe his lips were sealed? Would he bite off his own tongue to prevent himself from saying anything?
I have a few thoughts about the name choices and their implications as guidelines for the author's intentions with the characters. I'll post them soon. Oh, I have a half finished coloring job posted for ya. Feel free to laugh at me.
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You just plot-bunny me all the time. :) Washed the dogtags? Details on how he died? This is going to end up being longer than I expected. *wanders off to keep writing*
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Sasuke's reaction is good, yes, I like that a lot. And I think Kakashi's awkwardness is warrented too - he's not really one for physical contact (thinking back to that time whan Naruto hugs him on the bridge when he gives them the forms for the Chuunin exam).
I like. Well done! :D
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Great minds think alike? XD
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Seriously, I shouldn't be cracking jokes at such an agnsty, great fic. I blame you for desentizing me to the pain. ^^U