Ugh, between you and Dark and her Eight Gates, I'm gonna go crawl in a hole and write about possession. And not the fun kind. *sighs*
But this was good. :) As usual, you have beautiful turns of phrases and ways of making things hurt. Loved the bit about Sakura peeling apples at the edge of the bed, and Raidou sounding cheerfully pained ever since Genma died. Physical descriptions would have been handy, 'cause with the 'Ne, sensei" I kept imagining 12-year-old Naruto, and then I'd have to stop and revise. *grins* But this was lovely. :)
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Date: 2006-06-01 10:12 pm (UTC)Ugh, between you and Dark and her Eight Gates, I'm gonna go crawl in a hole and write about possession. And not the fun kind. *sighs*
But this was good. :) As usual, you have beautiful turns of phrases and ways of making things hurt. Loved the bit about Sakura peeling apples at the edge of the bed, and Raidou sounding cheerfully pained ever since Genma died. Physical descriptions would have been handy, 'cause with the 'Ne, sensei" I kept imagining 12-year-old Naruto, and then I'd have to stop and revise. *grins* But this was lovely. :)
J